sort of Short...but not totally terrible

You could try painting in windows 7 paint or something with better colors and brushes. You might like to develop some type of plot even if it's like: guy goes outside, guy gets into fight, saves world---amazing! Because that way it would not be just the lousy stick fight that it is now. Links are broken. The Sifter character is cool. Try to get your hands on some good graphics software and fool around just making pictures for a while. Notice how simple most flash work is and how much time is spent on graphics, even for stick fights. Keep at it though, good effort.