still needs some work

part of it looks like it was made in pivot and that's no good but i guess it was sort of decent but the 3rd animation was good

Well...

It really needs work. Your animation was smooth, but in order to be good, you need to use easing. The third animation was really good though.

Needs work

The animation style is a little bit choppy, and the sound effects don't always match up with the movement of the figures. However, this could be really good with some more tweaking. This sort of concept would make a really good satire, but at the moment I'm just not feeling it.

lol?

this animation sucks, hopefully my gradma does better ,dude go check some tutorials, with that frames you most to do that in less 1 minute o.o

ascetic

Okay, it's just a test (i hope), maybe you'll make something decent next time, but please, compress music in your flash. 5,1 Mb for movie like that - it's five times more than just 'too much'.