The Sugar Claws: V-VII

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Note: Please read the prior comics first or this won't make any sense!

So here we are at chapter five, only two more comics to go!
This one is the longest so far, and I'm pretty happy with the result.

If you like this comic check out "CoolJaw: Dreaming Darkly", they have similar themes and share some characters.

*A link to "Cooljaw: Dreaming Darkly" can be found at the end of this comic.

As always I respond to all reviews, and if you wanna receive a P.M. when I release
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- Celx

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This needs a movie.

If this was ass, i'd tap it. Hard. the latest one is so inspiring, and you definitely got the fable/fairy tale effect. I'm no professional rater, but I know a good series when i see one. Keep'em coming, and keep'em creative.

Celx-Requin responds:

Thanks man!
Did you end up seeing the last one?

- Celx

Okay! First review in my 3-hour rush! Let's go!

Ok, it's a tad confusing, but honestly. Nice work! Even without having read the previous ones, this is still really good, and I understood it reasonably well (...I think).

There's a lot of "heavy" content, and you can see the problem with the main character clearly. I thought the beginning was interesting, showing that dragon-like-thing-beast-whatever-it-i s in a world that I can only assume is the mind of the main character. The plot is well-done, thought I'm not exactly sure what made the main character's friend pull the fork out. That and how it actually went alright. I'm also not exactly sure how the main character can talk, considering she (assuming it's a she) has a fork in her throat. /Generally/ people wouldn't be able to talk if there was a fork lodged in their throat. Just saying. The music is nice, fits in well with the comic, and though there isn't much animation, it doesn't need it. It's a comic, not really a movie.

Overall, good plot, good music, good art, good multi-world idea. Hope to see more.

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Celx-Requin responds:

It ends in October, I'm working on the final Issue today...

- Celx

Still love the style

There's not a lot that differs in terms of quality from chapter to chapter. It doesn't really need to.

I've been reading and reviewing a lot of your stuff, and I really think that you've done a seriously amazing job with the storyline, plot and general feel of this story. The atmosphere the story itself is placed in, is created around the reader by use of music and your pretty distinct art style.

There's not much animation, but the graphics are neat and unique. The color palette you used really gets out the contrasts in the story. The music still doesn't loop perfectly, but the sound itself is pretty good.

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Celx-Requin responds:

I hope you will drop in for the last release in October!

- Celx

Heavy stuff

Oh wow, this story turns into some heavy stuff. Even more heavy than your previous comic. At least this affects me more than "sugar claws" for some reason.

I like the way you play around with different colours here. The pink "real world" and the blue "other world/dream world" create a very strong contrast. A contrast that makes this comic so interesting to read.

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Celx-Requin responds:

I blame Todd Solondz...

Thanks for the review!
- Celx

Interesting Comic :o

Loved the style you used here, very unique and colorful!
The music you chose was also a pretty nifty addition to this project :D

Wished it would have been longer though?
Maybe consider using more than one song in accordance with the mood of the comic as well?

Just suggestions though :)
Great Effort!
~Dj Sonik

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Celx-Requin responds:

The final release will have one extra piece of music, I want to include more tracks but it's a file size issue.

- Celx

Credits & Info

2.73 / 5.00

Aug 9, 2011
10:10 PM EDT