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Wow!!!!!!!!

This is getting more and more thrilling with each new episode!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

epic

awesome and epic

Call me picky..

But since your finale of Primal Wars wasn't good, I am expecting you to do better here. But I really don't see the fascination or improvement in your artistry. You spend a lot of time drawing a perfectly round buttocks but the woman can't walk like a human being. The little glow lights on monitors look cool but lasers sound like cheesy 90's sci fi movies. You need to spend time on all the little things that smooth the ride, not just shameless ass shots and flashy lights. I am critical here, i know, but I am just trying to get give some criticism. Because in Newgrounds, there are those who give "10's" to everything and exalt the author as a god of flash, when things are far from perfect. Or they give "0's" to everything and tell you you are demon spawn. I guess I am trying to write in the middle. I have read a lot of reviews from critical newgrounds members and they all say the same thing: Your animation has the potential for brilliance, but there are many small tweaks you can make to create a more streamline and seamless flash. Your audio needs more tweaking in regards to overall volume on some parts and the variety of sounds played. I think this plagued you in Primal Wars too. Additionally, the movements are sometimes unnatural in all the characters. She walks like a duck, especially when walking towards the viewer. Just some small things.

Damn!

Everything is just great! Top notch work! Animation as always perfect. It has a story and interesting characters. One little thing that I didn't like was dialogues. You should work more on that. But everything else was perfect. Keep it up!
P.S. I dont understand why it has not so many views?