Some great points, some bad points.
This little flash had some great and some not so great points. Good points first:
Voice acting was absolutely amazing, completely crisp, and beautiful. Both the quality and the voices used in general worked perfectly in the story.
And that's the second great part. The storytelling of the flash was just amazing. Such a great story, obviously quite deep, though I have not seen the first episode.
THe animations and graphics however, were not of top quality. THe animation was somewhat choppy throughout, and the drawings, though not too bad when still and in simple poses, it didn't look very good a lot of the time. The quality of the film as well was problematic, with pixels and such.
Also surprised at your choice of music, which didn't seem to fit this flash very well. I'd expect something more asian, and old.
You should also have a preloader and a replay button, instead of having it loop eternally.
KAG of the Review Request Club