fair
animation is fantasic, but like every one was saying the story could use work. next time write up something and let a few of your friends read it and just listen, does it sound natural? and get your friends to give input. once you have the story you will be a great animator. there is a saying that goes " a shitty script makes a shitty movie" as blunt as that is but its true. one last thing when you do a sprite animation try to get sprites that all match, i mean you have a 8-bit seal and toad but a 16-bit mario it just looks weird
looking forward to future work