Hmm.
Good story, good animation, but your need to tighten up your timings...is very slow to get to the point with lots of uncessary pauses. Also, maybe use some kind of distortion on your voice - both the characters sound identical :)
Hmm.
Good story, good animation, but your need to tighten up your timings...is very slow to get to the point with lots of uncessary pauses. Also, maybe use some kind of distortion on your voice - both the characters sound identical :)