Newgrounds Background Image Theme

fattoler just joined the crew!

We need you on the team, too.

Support Newgrounds and get tons of perks for just $2.99!

Create a Free Account and then..

Become a Supporter!

My Demons are fat

Share Collapse

Author Comments

You'll be presented a monster. You'll be able to see inside of him. You'll see his insides. Each rib has one of my thoughts etched into it.
If you click on the words it will take you to an image and a blurb describing this thought. It will open a separate window to a larger image so you can look at them up close.

This can be called emo. But I argue that this is emo with good intentions.

Over the past year I have been bothered by the same thoughts. That's what this flash is about. Eight images that have plagued me for over a year. Hopefully those images will leave and I can get some peace now.
reviews are welcomed.

: )

Log in / sign up to vote & review!


Well, I can't say much about the pictures/writings in this flash, you're style is really great!! My favorites are shallow, slow, war, hurt and math (who doesn't hates math?).
I love your monochromatic style, it's really fitting for this kind of themes.
The music was amazing too! It had a relaxing kinda disturbing feeling. I love it!

I'm giving you a 9 just because almost all the content of this flash was "outside". It would be better if you put the pictures inside of it and a button to watch them in high resolution at your deviantart page. For the ones that were too big to fit the screen you could have added a "rolling" feature, but that may have required a bit more of actionscript knowledge. The buttons were a little annoying too, I wish they had a bigger click area. Not sure if you can fix that, but I understand if you don't.

Overall it was an amazing flash! Keep it up!
(a little suggestion: in your library, right click your main menu image, go to properties and check the "Allow Smoothing" option. The rolling at the beginning will look smoother!)

TreasurePlanet responds:

Thank you so much for your constructive review!

I can see how the "It would be better if you put the pictures inside of it and a button to watch them in high resolution at your deviantart page."
but this was never supposed to get as big as it did, and when it was this big I didn't have time to go back and mess with the foundation.

I have zero knowledge of actionscript

and htank you very very much for the tip!

what an insight

i didnt realized it to be so good !!
but infact ofcoz it was very good !!
And man you rock the arts...you do good portraying the dark things of world !

TreasurePlanet responds:

thank you so much for your kind words!


As a published poet...

I once knew "Blank" and "Hurt"; but now I'm mostly "Slow" and "Fail".

I did enjoy some of the accompanying artwork. Did you draw that yourself? It doesn't matter to me really, it was intriguing either way.

If you aren't already a writer, perhaps explore the possibility.

TreasurePlanet responds:

Im glad that people can pick a combination of the titles and describe who they are.

Im glad that you liked it.
I did do the artwork and the writing.

I am not a writer but I am the son of a poet...so I think that's where I get that from : )

thanks for the review!

Good But...

This would be better placed on the art side as a gallery. 90% of this is pop-up windows to another site. Great art, and idea, but you could have made it all viewable within newgrounds, as you should have.

TreasurePlanet responds:

try all of the windows dude.

thanks anyway.

Pretty good

-Really nice sketchy notebook drawing kind of style. You don't see this kind of drawing too much outside of the art portal. I'd actually suggest putting it there if it wasn't as interactive as it is. But seeing that it does have a good amount of interactivity it lends itself to being in the flash portal.

-Lots of interesting demon styles and the way that you designed them. Usually you see very standard little devil type of demons but yours are much different. It didn't bother me that every one was in a different window since there is something to go with them. Overall I found this pretty creative.

-Review Request Club

TreasurePlanet responds:

I wasn't sure whether I should upload them into the portal as well.
seems kinda like I would be spamming newgrounds.
but i think i will anyway. Thanks for the suggestion.

Im glad you weren't bothered by it being opened in a different window.

Thanks for your review.

Credits & Info

4.18 / 5.00

Apr 2, 2011
4:32 PM EDT