Shadic4101 really good
is this suppose to be 1 big short story or just random things oddball does?
Author Comments
The second Oddball toon, this one was to take more of a story approach to see which I prefer, but personally I think unrelated shorts (see Lemon-Aid)
Either way, let me know what you think! Story or shorts!
Enjoy!
- KrEid
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siaskain 
xyulie Lemme see..
I think the shorts thing would be good but because its SO short we don't get to develop a connection to the character to where when she dies (or lives) at the end, it's not impactful enough. With the way you're writing for the Oddball character now, I'd like to see her in a story approach. But if you're gonna do the Aeon Flux thing, you're gonna have to be able to create an intriguing short story each episode for them to be impactful.
Kreid responds:
Yeah I'm likely to just be doing shorts. Gives me a chance to make them more frequent, as well as letting me work on Uni and my other series!
Nice man
Very original and i lvoe where she flips em of at the end
Kreid responds:
Wouldn't you be mad too?
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