I admit that I couldn't understand this. It was just a mummy pole vaulting. I guess it wasn't terrible. I mean, it is the thing I was expecting. Did he get unraveled at the end? Was that the joke?
Uh, Happy Halloween season! I’m lucky to have reviewed this in October. The first, no less! The animation wasn’t bad. It just had little set up and punchline.
awe....freakin some yea man (i know its three words) nice touch on the title and the animation just cool man
and funny. but just like what Wade-nz said, the pole.. the goddamn pole. you should have made it clearer to the viewers. good luck on your next, though. :)
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Nuckel u cant bloody tell how big the god dam pole is u stupid fuck its a cartoon and u wouldnt be able to tell how big anything is in it id like to see u do a better job!
I found it gay cus the art was ok but it was all of 30 seconds more or less and a dude running at a highjump.
I could see u making very funny cartoons in the future though
Line smoothing and a least a slight amount of shading could have done a miracle to the visuals. The actual jumping scene doesn't come close to anything that has to do with pole vaulting. And the pole itself is roughly 1.5 meter, that is something you really could have done better... Though I like the use of well known cartoon elements and the music. The humor is okay but it takes more to really make me laugh though. For future installments work on visuals and think about doing a storyboard or something to help you create keyframes for complex animations.