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first flash animation 09

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IM 12 years old ...i kinda suck at flash... this was my first try. please comment! thanks.(sorry nhzaul if you think i ripped your charater i just admire your flash skills!) also something was worng with my pc so there no sound srry.

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awesome and...

you should add sound, preloader, ans a background, and then reupload this and if you need sounds copy and paste this URL:

http://stonesbucket.com/sound-packs-f lash-animation-sfx-free-sounds-free-s fx/

it's the sounds from fluidanims.com, an there is a lot!

Not a bad first shot

This exceeds a lot of other "my first flash movies" just because it's not five seconds long and without a conclusion. A lot of the major flaws in this are easy fixes. Drawing a quick background, for example, adding sound and play buttons. The shading on the characters and occasional FBF animation was a nice touch, but you kept turning you characters into three motion lines as a crutch. :(
If my four out of ten seems harsh, keep in mind that zero stars represents the worst flash and ten is the best, so four seems to be an accurate placement of this film according to that spectrum.
You do have potential. keep working and best of luck.

monkeyknight responds:

thats the tenical side of it........which dulls it down i guess.

You deserve pizza.

Ok, no sound BUT I DON'T CARE!!
YOU HAS A FUTURE!!! 8/10! (I take two points away for the sound)

monkeyknight responds:

appriciated dude :D

Whoa, whoa, whoa!!!!

You're saying you SUCK At FLASH? I ain't lying but this is good!!! Very smooth and nice animation!!!! No offense!!! This is a good try!!! ^^
(gives you a cookie)

monkeyknight responds:

i eats the cookie/ biscuit(yup thats the uk) and yh its a ok start i guess.

You suck at Flash!?

That´s obviously a lie!
It looks Smooth, awesome, perfect!
You just need to learn how to:
-Stop the animation
-Replay button
And use the preloader.

monkeyknight responds:

thanks i kinda am new to flash so i wasnt aware of these things..but thanks for the tips! :D