not too bad,

thanks for the effort, the game is interesting idea, for a a lil adventure game, good art, fair controls, i wish there was a weapon shop, and inn where you can rest before fighting the creature in the cave, otherwise, a nice lil game, i look forward to seeing this completed...

nice game...

altho the intro is a little to long. i woud sugest in the real one to make so that you can skip it or watchi it. besides that great game.

List of improvements:

Here is a brief list of things that should be added:

-"Roll over" descriptions for items found in the store. I won't buy something if I don't know what it does.

-Better graphics. Honestly, about a third of a good game is good aesthetics.

-In dialogue, the "next" button should be in the same place, for convenience.

Work on these, and you will have an improved game, by far.

Has potential

This game has potential, really, it does. The dialogue needs a bit of work, mainly all the u's. It looks fine, graphics are good and it looks like you put a lot of work into this. Combat system is fine, I like the simplicity. Nice job, Ill be looking forward to the finished product. 4/5, 9/10.

I think your finished product will have potential

It's not bad for a demo.... My suggestions are color scheme improvement certain bright color's can clash such as the use of bright blue and yellows.. Im guessing you are going for a side scrolling rpg ? The dialogue seemed sort of relaxed for an rpg.. All the rpg's I have played always had a serious tone even the some of the more laxed one's.. such as all the Final Fantasy titles.. or Wild Arms....

Your control setup seems slightly un user friendly the a w c buttons dont feel to natural perhaps you could incorporate a control setup in your final version.. Other than that I did enjoy it and cant wait to see the final game.. Im sure everyone will enjoy it and it will have great scores..

Keep up the good work