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short and simple.
A. It's a decent game, a good mix of platforming and rpg
B. Graphics... so so... either improve them, or find a new STYLE that works for you.
C. OMG... may we please have a skip butten for story at start?
D. Yellow text on yellow book = hard to read
E. During chatting, PLEASE keep the "next" on the same side so you don't have to go back and fourth, really annoying.
Keep up the work, and keep improving, I do have one glitch concern, when fighting snake, if you keep slashing after you kill it but before it ddisapears, you'll keep killing it, and it'll say you keep earning exp, even though after battle you only are at level 2 regaurdless!