Some good info!
~ I liked the idea of this.
~ The information included in the flash was very good
~ It wasn't just a copy and paste, you put it into your own words which was good!
~ The layout was good in some places
~ I liked the fact you gave external links too
~ The music was very annoying
~ In some places it was just like a big block of text.
~ The text was a bit small and hard to read
~ Maybe have/include a mute button for the music?
~ Maybe use some paragraphs in some places next time where it is just a block of text? (I'm thinking mainly for "Measure 2: Check for spelling/grammar errors") Not only will it spread it out and fill the page, but it will be easier to read too!
~ I think you should make the text a font size bigger and maybe bold it next time? It was quick hard to see and when I read it, it was a strain on my eyes
~ I loved the idea of using this to protect NG and warn people. I liked this.
~ Because of some downfalls though, your score decreased, not by much though.
~ I think if you took the "Improvements" section into account though, this flash could be really good!
~ I'm voting 4 and giving you 7/10 stars