It's got clunky voice animation, the plot line is as cliche as can be past the midway point. Because the animator didn't know how to do fights, they're super strange. Hands and feet are strange too.
It's not as iconic in the realm of Flash as "Fallen Angel" for its time, and animations like Paladin are also a completed series. With the passage of time, this pales in comparison to later Flash animations.The Gothic aesthetic isn't as pronounced as in Lilium, and the voice acting for Lord Dark is hammier than a Christmas morning.
But I still have a soft spot for this. It has fun symbolism spread throughout, and the opening part of the story is incredibly interesting. The romance gets a bit tacked on by the end, but I still really felt that for the most part it was cute. I never say Lilium as a kid, mainly because I was super scared, this ended up taking it's place. This probably was a huge influence on me as I grew up, and I really appreciate the fact that you've made this.There's no real point in criticizing something when you've proven how much better you've become, so this is just a heartfelt thanks for making Asaroki.
PS: Your website is down, or at least the original. Do you have the comic uploaded somewhere else?