Sorry for the trippy Background, I liked it.
And sorry if it's too fast, I purposely wanted it to be a bit fast paced, but its a bit too much. :\, If you really want to read the text that comes up in the animation just right click > play, That should pause the animation, to play it again, Do the same thing.
I am getting a hang of flash, Ive only had it for about a month and animated with it only a few times, This is my 2nd submission (Technically, Lol) and I put a lot of effort into this.
The aim is to have simple dots and lines fight each other, I suppose. I tried to do something a bit simple than stick figures and stuff, since I am still learning.
This was inspired by all the 'Line' submissions, such as Frame 1-4 and Teh Dot.
PS: The thing coming off the white line after he takes a piss isnt a penis! It was a failed hand, Lulz. *o.o*
Hmm... To be honest...
...I think the background ruined it.
It's messed up.
You can't fallow the line-fight correctly.
But that's the bad stuff, like Matt said, you've improved ;)
It's smoother!
...but seriously...dude..
Make your own flash-based and original backgrounds.
~ Keep it up ^-^
Okay thanks i still think its better than most people that have had flash for 4 weeks :3
Yeah, you've definitly improved.
It was good! Nice and smooth and everything! Good job.
Maybe, you should move onto a diffrent style now? You've fully grasped Lines..
Anyway, good look on your next submission <3
Okies
Interesting Idea
Although I've seen some frame-by-frame line animations before, I haven't heard too much of the lines actually fighting. I think what you have here is certainly a good idea, it can just be executed better. The background, for example, could have been interactive with the lines, and the FPS can be increased to enhance quality. Overall, nice work!
Thanks!
Be Different
I guess seeing that you just started with flash that this is what you produce, but try to think out of the box if you're going to do something like that, I mean how many animations like this have you seen. If you're going to go with that type of style then try something more unique than just fighting. Kudos on taking the time to learn flash though. Maybe look at some tutorials.
Ive looked at tutorials, ive never seen a Line fighting flash before.
Very boring
It looks like a bunch of scribbles. Try harder if you try again. Or you could do something different.
Still doesnt deserve a zero does it? :(
