Yeah, you've definitly improved.
It was good! Nice and smooth and everything! Good job.
Maybe, you should move onto a diffrent style now? You've fully grasped Lines..
Anyway, good look on your next submission <3
Reviews for "The Line Battle"
Bloodman101 responds:
Okies
good
good stuff a bit short
Bloodman101 responds:
Thanks!
Interesting Idea
Although I've seen some frame-by-frame line animations before, I haven't heard too much of the lines actually fighting. I think what you have here is certainly a good idea, it can just be executed better. The background, for example, could have been interactive with the lines, and the FPS can be increased to enhance quality. Overall, nice work!
Bloodman101 responds:
Thanks!
Hmm... To be honest...
...I think the background ruined it.
It's messed up.
You can't fallow the line-fight correctly.
But that's the bad stuff, like Matt said, you've improved ;)
It's smoother!
...but seriously...dude..
Make your own flash-based and original backgrounds.
~ Keep it up ^-^
Bloodman101 responds:
Okay thanks i still think its better than most people that have had flash for 4 weeks :3
Be Different
I guess seeing that you just started with flash that this is what you produce, but try to think out of the box if you're going to do something like that, I mean how many animations like this have you seen. If you're going to go with that type of style then try something more unique than just fighting. Kudos on taking the time to learn flash though. Maybe look at some tutorials.
Bloodman101 responds:
Ive looked at tutorials, ive never seen a Line fighting flash before.