Potential it is!
~ Animation/Graphics ~
Great job. I really enjoyed your style here. Great art work and graphics and pretty smooth animation all around. I think you have a lot of talent and I should check out more of your flashes sometime.
~ Story/Concept ~
I also have a lot of unfinished stuff that I could throw together in a flash submission and submit, but I wouldn't be proud of my stuff. :P It's unfinished for a reason. Now your stuff though.. if you had a writer or someone to make a story/plot for you I think you could go a long way. Perhaps even to the point that you were one of the top artists on newgrounds.
Need a writer I've written for quite a bit of stuff before so you can always send me a PM.
I do like the idea of a flash submission showcasing unfinished stuff though. Great pieces all around.
~ Audio ~
Ha, quite a comical song in my opinion. Went almost perfect with your animations. Good job with the choice here.
~ Overall ~
Remember if you ever need a writer I'd be more than happy to do it. You have a lot of talent and this was a good pile of unfinished work.
~ Review Request Club ~