this one probably has a solid story, really!!!
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Well, this was actually made in December. I just forgot to put it up. Someone, someday, will write a virus that does this, I swear.
Solid storyline for sure
Needs some depth here and there.
I thought your animation had a decent storyline. Granted, I've seen flashes and television shows similar to it, but I thought it was an interesting submission. I liked when the character fell over at the end or when they knocked the letters off Google, I thought that was creative.
The voice quality and resolution could se some work. It seemed like it was louder in some part and choppy in other scenes. The animation could also be tweaked a tad, it would make the flash more entertaining. Overall, it was a cute submission with cool characters.
Orginality is the main factor here, mainly because it worked for you and against you. you can definately improve, this was a decent submission. Adding to the plot would benefit you as well. Keep up the good work!
Has potential
I think that most people, or at least most of us geek folk, would explore our new domain for a while before tiring of it. That would be great for a sequel.
nice
Pretty funny, and a great flash too :D