lol funny
short and random, but funny...
Reviews for "Computed"
this one probably has a solid story, really!!!
nice one
All of this was good. Audio needs some cleaning. animation could do with a little more detail. And at the end the bird should have died or got sent to another part of the computer. But all and all not bad.
awesome ^.^
verry well done, animation was a bit simplistic and the art wasn't awesome or anything, but.. well.. here I'll sum it up
Pro's
1-Original charecters
2-good story (not original, but you did a good and original take on it, evens if it was a bit simplified)
3-voice was easy to hear (though it sounded like you were a bit shy as if there were other people neer by.. try bieng more confident next time ^.^)
4-animation was well enough done that i could enjoy the show without bieng distracted by obvius tweens or really jerky animation
con's
1-that bieng said, the animation could be smother, try increasing the fps and add more frames inbetween each "keyframe"
2-voices were good, (fit the character) but the breathyness kept you well aware that it was a person talking thrue a microphone, again, a bit more guts in the voice should solve that.
all in all, a great job ^.^
Cheers!
Nick_Black
nice
Pretty funny, and a great flash too :D