Not Bad

Hey.

The detail in the art work is a little better in this one. (I reviewed "DON'T CALL ME THAT!", then this one.) The detail of the vehicles, hills, and trees? That's the kind of detail what I was referring to in the other review; not just solid colors. (-:

On this video, the first scene could have been a little better, but it's not too bad. You have a 3D perspective in it, but some objects, such as the legs of the bed, and the closet door (when opened) are flat. Hope that makes sense.

Animation was smooth. Nice parallax scrolling effect in the road scene.

Keep working and learning, and no doubt, your videos will get better.

This one has sounds! :-P

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- Ziro out.

Not bad...

not bad considering its only your second flash but the animation could be better and the same goes for sound but overall not bad for a second flash there is potential in you

not bad

it wasnt HORRIBLE especialy for your second made the drawings wernt all that great but the animation and flow of it were good id give you a higher score if the drawings were a little better

pretty good

good start for an animator, just keep working on those graphix

That was okay...

I really don't think you took enough time into trying to make it look like it wasn't made in MS Paint. Please be aware that when people are looking for a good Flash animation, they want good graphics to go with it. Otherwise, the animation was pretty good, especially for a beginner.