pretty good
good start for an animator, just keep working on those graphix
pretty good
good start for an animator, just keep working on those graphix
Thanks Dave, im going to keep working on everything.
Not bad...
not bad considering its only your second flash but the animation could be better and the same goes for sound but overall not bad for a second flash there is potential in you
Thanks for the advice and the compliments. Im going to keep at it.
Not Bad
Hey.
The detail in the art work is a little better in this one. (I reviewed "DON'T CALL ME THAT!", then this one.) The detail of the vehicles, hills, and trees? That's the kind of detail what I was referring to in the other review; not just solid colors. (-:
On this video, the first scene could have been a little better, but it's not too bad. You have a 3D perspective in it, but some objects, such as the legs of the bed, and the closet door (when opened) are flat. Hope that makes sense.
Animation was smooth. Nice parallax scrolling effect in the road scene.
Keep working and learning, and no doubt, your videos will get better.
This one has sounds! :-P
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Thanks. I am working on more all the time and I am constantly adding more detail. I am learning as i go. That does make sense when you describe the bed and the closet door. Thanks for the compliments and be on the lookout for more of my videos to come. :)
okay
it was a good sequence but bad quality. great for a first flash though.
Thanks for the compliment. I am going to keep working on more and try to get better.
not bad
it wasnt HORRIBLE especialy for your second made the drawings wernt all that great but the animation and flow of it were good id give you a higher score if the drawings were a little better
Thanks for your opinion. Ill keep working on making my graphics better.