This was cute
And so in a big event or show when it ends there is not much left, But with this movie you have left an echo of all the effort and that shows off well with this one. This was a rather cute animation, the story played out well and made for some good humor, This could be great with some subtitles, nice artwork and character designs though. Overall this was a good flash submission, there was some Enhanced details that made this worthwhile and you gave it some good momentum, and it kept me interested so you did have the right stuff and such, Now dont get me wrong there is still plenty of room for improvments and more enhancments but for the time being its pretty good I thiught.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
What can I say or even suggest to improve on this, Not sure I have anything to suggest as you coverd all the basics, This could be great with some subtitles, but thats about it,