This was decent
So you have an interesting flick here, there are some positive things about this flash aswell as a few negitives, But as I am starting out this review its a good piece and I have enjoyed how this has started out. This was a Treat and Wonderfully strated. I do like the "SPACE-BAR" as to move from scene to scene and dialog to dialog, but maybe allow it to just flow more as a story and remove all that space bar stuff just a thought. you have a good sprite film here. So Overall this was pretty decent, but with all that said I hope to see more stuff from you eventually. This was pretty pleasent maybe a few things could be more Enhanced and such. but its a Definite fave of mine.
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And once again I must say that was a pretty good entry something differant but I liked it for what it is, The only thing I can see you fixing up here would be to remove the "NEXT-SCENE" space bar option and let it flow as a story.