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Album: Skip and Fall by Arnas

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dud try to instol it in itunes or youtube

ur the best man ;)

wow nice!!

i love the beat!

Lol, this is really good!

This is a song that you would run or skip to, haha, it's pretty good, but, a little repetitive with the High synth, maybe switching between a low beat and a high one would take the repetitiveness away a little? other than that good job!

I liked it.

Sure it's the same beat pretty much but it was nice on the ears, I'm not going to download this or favorite it but i'll give you a nice rate.

A Bit Too... Loopy

The major complaint here: way too repetitive. The little sections went on for too long and you can always hear that little
"wa-wa-wa-wa-wa-wa-wa-wa-wa, wa-wa-wa!"
still in your head. Add something a bit new into it like a chorus. Nobody likes a loop that's too much of a loop.

I think that your main improvement would be if you added more instruments with different sounds. That way new sections could become produced, then you replay it over a couple times before moving on. If you just continue to repeat the exact same phrase over and over again (duh-duh-duh-dudu, du-du) It gets repetitive. Adding more sounds and musical movements always jumps from one kind of felling to another kind of feeling. e.g. angry feelings play low notes, happy feelings play higer notes, sad felling have more slurs (more connected notes, rather than choppy ones), etc. That way your listeners become more attached.

This made you tap your feet for a while, but didn't quite capture a positive, overall attitude. I think you could have really made a good piece of audio for the portal, but in my opinion it didn't quite "reach expectations". I thought you had a nicely flowing beginning part, but that's were a repetitive chunk pushed it's way through.

Overall, it's could become way better. Don't get me wrong, I liked this! I just really think you can improve strongly with help from your listeners.

Thanks for your time, if you ever read this.


Credits & Info


4.85 / 5.00

Jan 10, 2009
9:34 AM EST
File Info
2.7 MB
2 min 59 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.