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Just a small upload to gain some constructive criticm.
So its not finished yet,, not at all..
But i'd like to know how ppl on ng like this way.
Im not entirely sure on how to do this either.
Do i have to turn it in some kind of storyline that goes on for a few subs ?.
Or do i have to make random battles of them each time.

I do not know what to do next xD
It stops at 'Water Nation' :P (well, its not stopping there at all, but its not done further)

Please give reviews on what to IMPROVE. like the animating way, and stuff.
And could someone show me a tut on how to animate water properly ?. since im having difficulties :P.

Take Care,

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It was pretty cool...

For a beta. The story is your basic avatar schtuff, but the story scrolled just a TAD too fast. I had to strain a bit to read it.

The animation is much improved, however. There's always room for improvement, though- watch out for the resizing and jerky motions.

Other than that, good job.

St0rmChaser responds:

I will mention the resizing hint :D.
Yea it scrolls pretty fast xD. that is because of the fact that it might gets boring when it goes slow. remember that you can always pause it with the control bar.

Thanks for your review,

Water Nation! :D

Water Nation...
Yeah man... Water Nation.

Please, put something in the title like, part 0.1, beta version, not finished, etc
Anyway, nice animation, nice graphics... Keep it!

St0rmChaser responds:

gee :D thanks a lot gregolini.

I will gladly finish it then :D.

take care,

so good

the best opening i ever saw good job

St0rmChaser responds:

Wow :D many thanks :D.
I will support the opening with some music to,
it will syncropate perfectly :D. (i hope).



The opening text sequence could have been much more well-written... That alone would probably have bumped you up to a 6 or 7. Animation was alright, but the idea was just straight from the Nickelodeon show... Not horrible but not great.

St0rmChaser responds:

The idea ?.
Theres not much of an Idea yet, thats what i wrote in the description..
I might change everything yet. and thanks to you i will "properize" the opening text.

take care,

It's a start

You have what seams like a great idea for a show. I was actually looking forward to it. I would work on making all animation natural looking.
As for the water animation, take a look at adam phillips' (chluaid) animations. He is one of the best. He would sit for hours and hours at the river trying to capture the water perfectly. So just work hard and keep practicing.

St0rmChaser responds:

OKay :D Thanks.

I will definately take a look for his animations.
thanks for the good review also.

Take Care,

Credits & Info

3.25 / 5.00

Dec 16, 2008
4:55 PM EST