Not really that much wrong with it.
The intro text moved pretty quickly but pausing it was easy enough, the only thing I saw was a few spelling errors in the opening text. This looks interesting, ill be looking forward to seeing more. 3/5
Reviews for "StickFight Avatar"
St0rmChaser responds:
thanks shadowknight :D.
yup, more ppl say that the opening text is bad.
This is because i dont have a real story yet.
But i will change it for sure with correct spelling.
Take Care,
St0rmChaser
Nice but....
It's WAy too short even for a ''part 1'' you could have made it longer like after you presented all the ''people'' and what their land look like, that would have been better I think.
St0rmChaser responds:
Yes i will do that with this submission.
I will show a few battles between them :).
since my opinion is that all these texts and explainations are getting bored :P.
St0rmChaser
It's good but....
Please finish it!!!!!! What you have so far is excellent.
St0rmChaser responds:
Wow :D ty Arty.
i will finish it ^^
you guys motivate me huge for finishing it :D
Not bad, but....
It got stuck in the middle. Seems like it could have been good though.
St0rmChaser responds:
true. the movie goes till "Water Nation".
It was explained in the description :P.
Thanks for your review.
St0rmChaser
its too similar to avitar
dude im not a fan i just know the basic plot.... but thats waaay to much like the show..... start fresh with a new account... so no one sez.... "hey you changed it" like morons.... i know its tough to come up with original stuff but cmon :(
St0rmChaser responds:
hey its still quite original.
i changed the story, and i even left out airbending. ! (not on purpose :P )
Even the intro is totally diffrent.
St0rmChaser