A decent presentation, one that I can empathise with and see that its on the road to better things, some things can be Refined more and with more detail, but i really liked all the effort and all the work here, there was some points that could be much better but for the mostpart this was pretty entertaining. haha this was funny and very amusing the characters are pretty impressive aswell, I think this could use some subtitles but other then that this was pretty decent work. And here we are once again at the end of a decent flash I like how you are going with this one and it does seem like you are going in the right direction.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so here in this little session of the review I like to get some ideas thrown your way, including some helpfull hints and tips, and they should help so here you are, go wild with them if you like. Maybe adding some subtitles with this one, I could also see this as a series of small flashes or something like that.