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This was made by a beginner? But it was actually really good! I liked the art the most, it showed off some great skill and the story was very interesting. Nice choice of music also, you did a good job of making it work well.
~ DeIvL666 ~
Author Comments
Hello, all!
My name's Trent, and this is like, my first flash EVER. (Well, technically it's my second, but I'm not counting the first one because it was so crappy and got blammed, like, 5 seconds after it got uploaded. :D)
Anyways, after about five years of not animating in flash, i took a multimedia course at my school, and started getting into it again. So, here's my first ever flash cartoon! Hope you like it! (Please don't be too hard on me, I'm only a beginner! :(
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Not bad at all! The story in the beginning was really well written, and it did a good job of getting me interested in the storyline. The music you added in this was really good as well. Of course, the part that needs most improving here is the graphics. Improve your drawings and animations, which I'm sure you will over time, and I think you could be quite popular.
keep up the good work
the story is interesting, the art was a bit vague(get a drawing pad) and the sounds good enough... hope i'll see more of dark light, oce you've improved a bit :)
SWEEET!!!
i loved it did you purposly make the captive gu look like pico the only bad part is the art work needs slight improving
tcoffin responds:
Holy crap! i never even noticed the captive guy looked like pico!!
I hope NG doesn't sue me!!! :P
Great!!
I digg the art style, simple, kinda primary, but my word does it look story book based, which completely suited this cartoon. The plot however, was a little off the lines of your great storyline, which may i say was very creative and pleasant. You should have never said the end, but rather made this a teaser into future storylines of flash movies. If you keep at it, ur mouse drawing skills will get better, but i`d rather have the same art style as this one throughout. I see how much work u put into this, and the music was awesome in it`s mood.
All in all, ima giv u a 9 just so u keep going at it, and soon u`ll be gr8, im sure. anyway--keep it up man, gr8 flash