Good.
The second one is better. But it is good.
Author Comments
This is my first flash. It took me 10 hours of work, so I hope you 'll like it.
Please leave a review behind with some constructive critisim but don't tell me that my drawing sucks, I already know that. This is my first flash so don't be to hard on me.
Enjoyed about 2/3 of it
The opening sequence wasn't as interesting as I imagine you thought it was. However, It wasn't a terrible time as a whole. Keep trying.
One hungry fish.
Good plot, especially the end (even if the propeller on his head didnt make the least bit of sense). I noticed a lot of neat effects in the flash but all-in-all, it wasn't touched up enough to be considered a great flash. I have mixed feelings for the flash but it was okay. I hope you still plan on subitting part 2.
Sanxxx responds:
Yep I'll make part 2 and I'll make it way better than this one, I promise you!
black fish
very interesting idea
well...
...it werent too bad for a first flash! only problems are:
.the music kept stopping and u had 2 w8 ages 4 it 2 come back on again.
.there was no sound fx.
.and the start was 2 long.
