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The Black Fish

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This is my first flash. It took me 10 hours of work, so I hope you 'll like it.
Please leave a review behind with some constructive critisim but don't tell me that my drawing sucks, I already know that. This is my first flash so don't be to hard on me.

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Good.

The second one is better. But it is good.

Enjoyed about 2/3 of it

The opening sequence wasn't as interesting as I imagine you thought it was. However, It wasn't a terrible time as a whole. Keep trying.

One hungry fish.

Good plot, especially the end (even if the propeller on his head didnt make the least bit of sense). I noticed a lot of neat effects in the flash but all-in-all, it wasn't touched up enough to be considered a great flash. I have mixed feelings for the flash but it was okay. I hope you still plan on subitting part 2.

Sanxxx responds:

Yep I'll make part 2 and I'll make it way better than this one, I promise you!

black fish

very interesting idea

well...

...it werent too bad for a first flash! only problems are:

.the music kept stopping and u had 2 w8 ages 4 it 2 come back on again.
.there was no sound fx.
.and the start was 2 long.

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Uploaded
Sep 18, 2008
11:24 AM EDT

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