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Narrative Flash Remake

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Update: Sorry about the error with having the same poem twice, that will be resolved as soon as posible.

This is my 5th flash and I would like to think first truly finished flash. I have spent a lot of time learning, and I think bettering my flash which has allowed me to create a much more user friendly set up. Please enjoy a revisit to my first 3 poems ever written.

There is a stop audio but there is not a start audio so if you want to have the music back you have to go back tothe home page.

More of my poetry (BETTER POEMS) at www.poeticallyyours.com

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Poems are powerful

The poems are strong and the, subject matter child abuse?. Not easy reading but i felt that this is poetry with meaning.

Graphics. 8/10 The simple grey layout was a wonderful touch, to such bitter sweet poems. The buttons are nice the text looks, good easy to read. The writing is nice the words are emotional . The bonus poems are good, i liked the bunny strong stuff.

Sound.8/10 I was moved by the sounds and the music, fitted the poems well. A Distant Journey, by hzlancer was a stunning song. Sung with such feeling of ,and sorrow. The other So Is Life and Burden. All fitted nicely although short ,in the narrative of the poems. Moved me short but ,captured the feelings.

The poems are powerful the stories are all the same right? The Crime about the boy Rex ,Forsaken Child, and finally Figurative Hunger. Based on the book Glass Castle, by Jeanette Walls. Out of them all i felt Figurative Hunger ,was the strongest. Maybe with the hand and the kitthchen piece. All moved me the words are moving. Man an alcoholic because of his child abuse mother, touching him in wrong ways. I tried to undertand the words ,and i feel the poems are easy to get. If you read them a few times. I have heard of the latter ones. I really enjoyed looking ,through and learning.

Little mixed up at times as to the order the buttons are good. Although turing off the sound it would have been, nice to have it on again. Was the last one the same?. The bonus poems are good. The words are great why the repeating, poem an error shame it made me confused.

Overeall a little muddled at times, but poems made up for it.

review request club

SprintT responds:

You have a great eye for detail, and write great reviews. Thank you.

I do plan to have the repeating poem fixed here as soon as I dig up the file. The button system in effect is being scraped for a much more simple one that will also give the watcher more control at the same time. Also those were my first 3 poems I ever wrote to be honest and them going together was not planned. My work since is better in my opinion.

Keep an eye out.