truly awesome
you sir
is like the beat nic of Newgrounds :D
I never thought i would be possible to improve them but you have proven me wrong
well done
keep up with this awesome stuff!
Reviews for "Narrative Flash Remake"
SprintT responds:
Thank you mate :) Always the supporter :)
Loved it!
Some great poetry work here. You, my friend are a very talented poet! You had a few mis-spelt words, but oh well... I am looking forward to more of your work....
-RRC
SprintT responds:
Me and my spelling XD
Well correct spelling and better poems at www.poeticallyyours.com
Thanks mate
cool poetry
a creative way to showcase your work, good visuals, great poems with suitable music for the content, can't wait for more
.:.Review Request Club.:.
SprintT responds:
Thank you mate :) Glad you liked it :D
very nice
i liked the presentation.
audio was fitting.
poems were good.
good all around.
*RRC*
SprintT responds:
Thankyou, and I hope to make another soon with some of my better poetry.
\m/
The presentation of the poems is nice, but it's something to get used to, as it is a bit confusing at first.
The choice of audio was great and the music fitted the poems very well. You should have compressed the songs a bit more though, to reduce the file size and the loading time.
I noticed that "The Crime" and "The Forsaken Child" are the same poems, only with different music. Was that intentional?
Also, you should have made the link to your site in the preloader clickable. That way the viewer doesn't have to type in the adress manually.
{ Review Request Club }
SprintT responds:
Now I feel silly! That was not intentional, and probably happened when I reloaded to fix another issue. I will get the changed here ASAP! Also thankyou.