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Thanks to "the gs" for making the icon.

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I liked the drawings and the animation was good. I noticed all the detailed movement the skater clock performed, and the kickflip was awesome. However, this animation is short and rather meaningless. I was disappointed when I realized that the skater clock wasn't going to perform any tricks in the half-pipe he just stood there to get something heavy dropped on himself.

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sistem69 responds:

lol i know. but maybe next clock day.

\m/

It made me smile. Nothing more, but nothing less. The animations looked quite fluent and I liked that you put in some sounds here.

I also liked the "Monty Python"-ish weight that dropped on the Clock.

However, you should put in a bit more effort into your drawings. It's not that your drawings look bad, it's just that everything seems to be so "sterile".
There's nothing in the backgrounds. Just a plain wall or a bright blue sky. You can easily improve the backgrounds, if you add some graffiti to the wall or a few clouds to the sky. This can easily be done but improves your flash quite a lot.

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sistem69 responds:

ok thanks for the tips.

Not too good.

It was somewhat entertaining, but nothing too special.

The animation was pretty poor. The drawing wasn't really interesting, but it was kind of good. Animation = 4

The idea was a little good. I haven't really seen it done before, so it gets a few more points for that. Idea = 6

The execution was actually pretty bad, though. It only really had two clips which were actually pretty unsatisfying. It should have a few more, which would definitely raise the score a bit. Execution = 2

You should probably work on AT LEAST execution, it's you weakest subject.

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sistem69 responds:

ok thanks for the tips.

simple and clean

Visuals: nothing too complicated but consistently well drawn throughout the movie, good for a up and comer

Audio: again simple ,but they went in the right places and were of a decent quality

Overall: well put together, somewhat short, but compared to the majority of clock day submissions it's deserving of it's score

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sistem69 responds:

Thanks for the review.

It's a start

There are a few bits and pieces that you have performed well - the basics of the animation are straightforward and you've added the sounds of the skateboard well enough to the production.

The only problem is that it's really too short - he does a couple of skate jumps and then gets a large weight dropped on him. You didn't even change the appearance of the clock - just flattened it a little. Why not do some sort of crack down the glass of the face and maybe have a bent hand, to make it look more broken?

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sistem69 responds:

As i said i did it in very litle time and fucused more in the animation thanks for the review.