The Last Hour: Chapter 5

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The Last Hour series is an alternative interpretation of the Last Hours on earth before the coming of Christ. In this version of Revelations, the Anti-Christ allies himself with an alien race from the planet of Jaiba.

[[By the way, anyone who wants to try out to voice act for the next chapter, give me a PM]]

The Last Hour: Chapter 5 (The Deceived)
Time is running short for the rebellion. With the rebellion exposed, the rebels now must act quickly or suffer defeat by the hand of the powerful deceiver the Anti-Christ. The Anti-Christs' followers are growing by the minute. The world has been fooled into believing their savior is here. Ohh how wrong they are...

I hope you enjoy the series.
***I will respond to every single review. I'll be happy to take your criticism, and i'll take your suggestions into consideration. It's my promise for taking the time to watch this chapter. It will be perfect for you to increase your review/response ratio. Thanks again.***
***Chapter 6 is in production. I will post an update with more details soon***


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There we go.

This is the highest score that you have received from me to this point. :) I'm sorry that I called your first couple of submissions spam. You have improved greatly and if you keep improving like this then you will be pretty good at flash. Keep up the good work.

Animation/Graphics - The animation was actually there this time! It was just more then peoples mouth moving. People walked, their arms moved when they talked, etc.. Your drawing and animation skills have greatly improved also. By the time this series is done your last couple of episodes might be awesome.

Story - I loved the skip button and the intro wasn't too long this time. Good job on improving on those things. The length of your flash is getting better, but they just need to be a bit longer. That would get more people interested. I'm also still waiting for all of the action scenes. Hopefully some good action stuff will be coming up.

Audio - MUCH MUCH MUCH better. It didn't sound like you were verbally molesting the mic this time around and your voice was much clearer. Different voice actors, or at least a much different voice would help improve your flashes though.

Overall, you are getting a lot better at animating. Keep up the good work.


~ Review Request Club ~

Jaiba responds:

thanks i think this was 2nd to chapter 10 in terms of quality


Now you are finally getting somewhere! You improved A LOT since the last chapter.
The graphics look much better here. They are still a bit sloppy, but better than on your previous chapters. If you continue at this rate with your improvements, you'll be one of the top artists on newgrounds in no time. ;)

I liked that you cut down on introduction lenght. I think it was the first time the acutal episode was longer than the introduction.
I also liked the skip button you added there. That way we can jump straight into the action.

Also, you managed to produce a much better voice acting here than in chapter 5. Nearly no statics could be heard now. Great!
Still I'd say you should keep looking for different voice actors for your different characters.

{ Review Request Club }

Jaiba responds:

check out chapter 10. it will more than make up for the quality of this movie.
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /457202
plus i've listened to all of yalls reviews

Nice additions

I like the skip button that you added at the start and the animated logo that you've provided - it cuts out a lot of the useless crap that you didn't need in previous episodes.

Now there is the case that the episodes are too short, but we can work on that, I suppose. I think that it is nice to know that any user can come in at any episode and start watching with an understanding.

Given that all of the Anti-Christ's followers wear these necklaces, it is a little strange to see the Anti-Pope's drawn wrongly - it defies gravity in the chain loop.

Try zooming in and using a better tool - that way, the imagery of the whole project will look much more detailed and you will have much better results, which would be more deserving of the awards that you have won.

[Review Request Club]

Jaiba responds:

my last movie of the season. this will redeem my movies i hope
check out chapter 10. it will more than make up for the quality of this movie.
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /457202


a great suspenseful flash series, needs nothing added to it, the animations could be better but you are improving with time, keep at it

.:.Review Request Club.:.

Jaiba responds:

check out chapter 10. the season finale episode!!
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /457202

Getting Better

This is waay better than last time, you are on track to becoming successful via anime and graphics. This was one of your best yet.

Jaiba responds:

i know huh? glad u enjoyed it.

-jaiba award winning producer.

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3.06 / 5.00

Aug 8, 2008
8:24 PM EDT
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