Better.
I gave this one a much better rating than oyur previous works.
I really appreciate the "Skip" button too. I felt that was the major downfall of your earlier chapters.
Reviews for "The Last Hour: Chapter 5"
Jaiba responds:
thank you. appreciate your review. be on the lookout for chapter 6
The Last Hour: Chapter 5
I guess I have to hand it to you. Episode five is better than the rest.
But still isn't very good.
You haven't worked on getting more frame by frame work in there, its still just tweens. Nothing looks normal.
The sound quality was better than the rest, but It was stll hard to understand what they were saying.
As for the storyline, I had absolutely no idea what was going on. Was he talking to the tv? And what was he saying? You'll need to work on that some more.
--Overall--
Its something I would expect from someone who only has about 2 months, of flash experience, give or take some time. You could make the entire series better, if you made it more interesting to watch. One thing when making a flash is asking yourself: How will this make someone feel? And what will people think? Will they find it humorous, or will they feel it was a serious flash backed up by good animation?
Think about that when making your next episode.
Jaiba responds:
actually I only have 1 week of flash animation experience. i only got flash a week ago, and started playing around with flash. so i'd say i'm doing pretty good with only 1 week of practice and playing around.