yeah
get stonned and watch it its the sh*t
THIS IS JUST A TEST!
If you leave bad comments about some rip off,
i don't care cuz this is just a test in my flash skills
(Which aren't so good xP)
So yea, alot like David Firth ans Salad fingers,
BUT i can assure you:
No scenes or quotes are taken form any movie, in case
i didn't know...
IM WORKING ON A NEW MADE UP MOVIE
yeah
get stonned and watch it its the sh*t
this
is fucking salad fingers done badly =)
Resemblence of Salad Fingers.
Animation / Graphics - Actually not bad at all. Some parts I even really liked. If you worked on the animation and drawing just a bit more on your next submission it will get a better rating from me.
Story - Looks like you were trying to make a Salad Fingers type of movie here. Not too bad, but the only thing I recommend is actually adding just a bit of a story to it like the other Salad Fingers movies. You never know you could make a decent little series out of it.
Audio - There wasn't anything wrong with the audio as I can see. The voices were fine in my opinion.
Overall, just work on your skills a little bit and work on the story and/or make it longer and I think you could make some decent flash. This really doesn't deserve to have a score this low.
- GS -
C52
Newgrounds Mafia.
I know, i'm not so good in flash, i just tried :)
Cus i enjoy David Firth's work.
I can make a longer one, but it's so stressing that i have to add the
graphics again and again for every sinlge scene!
Got any flash tips?
Tell me!
No!
Rip-offs are NOT okay! Use your own creativity to form something new and not another mediocre Salad Fingers wannabe. -_-
On a positive note: The animation wasn't entirely bad. :)
tip
it was like a rip off of a few of firths works all in one.
try your own stuff, i don't know if this was suppposed to be serious or a joke, if it's a joke then specify before people start accusing you of ripping off someone else.
and if this was serious then you need to put some creativity into it, i could swear i've heard at least one of those lines in one of firth's submissions. but i will give you 2 stars for doing your own animation.
It's a joke, i just like to make and see movies with no meaning, and just absurd.
Don't worry, i'm working on something