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Reviews for "Drug Soup"

yeah

get stonned and watch it its the sh*t

Nice attempt..id clean up the vocal takes..

Pretty trippy (like firth) But could use a little more effort :) not so much blank dull white space. BUt still a cool flash.

Annannas responds:

Well, one of some good comments :)

It's just a test, check out my new vid instead of wasting time on this one!

Resemblence of Salad Fingers.

Animation / Graphics - Actually not bad at all. Some parts I even really liked. If you worked on the animation and drawing just a bit more on your next submission it will get a better rating from me.

Story - Looks like you were trying to make a Salad Fingers type of movie here. Not too bad, but the only thing I recommend is actually adding just a bit of a story to it like the other Salad Fingers movies. You never know you could make a decent little series out of it.

Audio - There wasn't anything wrong with the audio as I can see. The voices were fine in my opinion.

Overall, just work on your skills a little bit and work on the story and/or make it longer and I think you could make some decent flash. This really doesn't deserve to have a score this low.

- GS -

C52

Newgrounds Mafia.

Annannas responds:

I know, i'm not so good in flash, i just tried :)
Cus i enjoy David Firth's work.

I can make a longer one, but it's so stressing that i have to add the
graphics again and again for every sinlge scene!

Got any flash tips?
Tell me!

well...

Almost makes difference

yeah, *almost*

But sadly, not. It WOULD be ok, if it were longer, and if you haven't said that Mr. Firth comment. That really dragged down its value.
Peace

Annannas responds:

I know