yeah
get stonned and watch it its the sh*t
yeah
get stonned and watch it its the sh*t
Nice attempt..id clean up the vocal takes..
Pretty trippy (like firth) But could use a little more effort :) not so much blank dull white space. BUt still a cool flash.
Well, one of some good comments :)
It's just a test, check out my new vid instead of wasting time on this one!
Resemblence of Salad Fingers.
Animation / Graphics - Actually not bad at all. Some parts I even really liked. If you worked on the animation and drawing just a bit more on your next submission it will get a better rating from me.
Story - Looks like you were trying to make a Salad Fingers type of movie here. Not too bad, but the only thing I recommend is actually adding just a bit of a story to it like the other Salad Fingers movies. You never know you could make a decent little series out of it.
Audio - There wasn't anything wrong with the audio as I can see. The voices were fine in my opinion.
Overall, just work on your skills a little bit and work on the story and/or make it longer and I think you could make some decent flash. This really doesn't deserve to have a score this low.
- GS -
C52
Newgrounds Mafia.
I know, i'm not so good in flash, i just tried :)
Cus i enjoy David Firth's work.
I can make a longer one, but it's so stressing that i have to add the
graphics again and again for every sinlge scene!
Got any flash tips?
Tell me!
well...
Almost makes difference
yeah, *almost*
But sadly, not. It WOULD be ok, if it were longer, and if you haven't said that Mr. Firth comment. That really dragged down its value.
Peace
I know