you have great potential .
They are TOTALLY fighting in an office building
It seems like you went back and touched up the animation while leaving the voice acting the way it was. That was disappointing. There are some lines given that desperately need revision. It does look better than the original, and the fight scene does help a bit, but if the series continues to sound like the first episode, it's going to be a challenge to sit through. That said, I'm looking forward to the continuation of the story.
wat is the name of the song during the credits
Departure, by Cry of Silence