nice job...
i liked the story line, and the animation wasn't bad. the voice acting and the dialogue were a negative for me, but i think you could do much better throughout the story.
Reviews for "Exile Preliminary Rem"
HEY KIDS
For fuck's sakes, all of you 12 year olds on this site....quit bashing him!
Sure, he did slack off in some spots, but who cares? Is he a professional animator? No, not yet, so PISS OFF. Give GOOD criticism, such as "Hey, you could work on _____, but otherwise nice job". Don't be a total asshole and just bash his work....*cough*...chickengirl and psychoticdemon...*cough* since YOU BOTH have nothing submitted to NG, or it totally blows. Umm, Chickengirl, last time I checked, 3.80 is A LOT higher than your impressive score of 2.51 on "Run Hitler Run".
Well I'm done sounding like a prick :D
Good job on this one bud, WHAT MUSIC DO I NEED TO MAKE?
<QUOTE> "suddenly switching between two different kinds of music can be annoying" <QUOTE>
Umm, does not compute? When did that happen? In case you're all like "Why does he care?......I made the music :D, so yeah
Kids these days..... *shakes head*
RiverJordan responds:
Chyeah!
Really great job!
The city was well made with a lot of details and all. The body movement wasn't that bad and with the sound you just need to try to make it a bit smoother thats all. Don't worry about most critics just focus on positive criticism and good advice. Keep up the good work you really have a nice story here.
keep trying...
i don't want to sound mean but this was..mediocre... the animation of the figures wasn't bad, but the graphics were...and that wonky animation with the faces was just annoying... i could see what you were trying to do but it just didn't come out right...the voice acting could use some work and you should try to find a better way to sync the music..suddenly switching between two different kinds of music can be annoying.....
it wasn't terrible but it wasn't great..about average...just keep practising.. i know cell by cell animation is a bitch to do but with more practise you can get better!
cool
The action scene in the beginning was great! Well done!