Pretty short and simplistic but that was quite a big surprise indeed.

Please slow down speedy!
It was too fast.
And this rate should be T.

Bad points.

It was too short.
And why would Luigi do that all of a sudden?
Maybe he was drunk.

The speech was too fast but it was good.

Man, that almost made me wet myself when Mario exploded.

Not bad.

I know this was your first movie, so judging this would be kinda pointless. It was good effort for a first submission!