So it seems cool, a lot of reading though... a lot of reading... concept comes together well, but you have to show by example instead of just writing everything out for the players. Subtlety does wonders for story.
Obviously unfinished, I wish it were completed, but it looks like this was the end for it, what a shame.
The game play was actually pretty bad, from moving around being generally slow feeling, to the main character explaining things in a monologue every screen, and the acid traps at the end were complete BS. Could've been done better, the startup took forever for something so short.