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A short submission with no audio. It's my first animation. Everything was done entirely on paper and then shot onto a computer and finally transferred into flash. The computer screwed up on me partway through and I had no way to go back and fix it afterwords which is why things get a little slow in the middle. Don't be too harsh.

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would love to see this coloured and finished

this was brilliant, i would love to see it all re done in flash, maby with some music.

Slackman responds:

Perhaps sometime in the future. I'm curious to see how this would turn out redone in Flash myself, but it'll have to wait. I'm happy you liked it though.

Bloody good

Really good animations, maybe a bit short but other than that great
10/10 5

Slackman responds:

Thanks for the support and advice. The next one will be a bit longer!

Cool ANimation

I have ultimate respect for people that can draw. I suck at drawing now. I was great when I was a kid.

Thanks to Flash I can have straight lines now... lol.

ANYWAY!!! I like the animation. It wasn't really slow like you said, but it would have benefited from some music overlayed onto it.

Something like this must take quite some time as you have to redraw everything and it looked great.

Nice job!

Slackman responds:

Thanks. Years of not paying attention in class have led to me being able to doodle pretty well. My next short will have music. Thanks for the advise!


this one was nice. But if you added some colour, a background, sound and made it a bit longer it would have been a funny and entertaining. You should keep up the good work, cuz I think you have talent. currently this flash isnt something I would want to have in the portal, so Im blamming, but if you "upgrade" the flash abit, and perhaps make it a bit longer I would have given a nice score (4 or something,(out of 5))

Slackman responds:

I appreciate the honesty. My next piece will be a bit longer, have color, music and backgrounds.


Really good looking piece of art...just put music/sounds under it. One of the best first animations i've seen...keep up the good work!

Slackman responds:

Well thanks! I haven't been able to find any music I thought complimented this short all that well, which is why I didn't add any. For the next one, it's something I'm keeping in mind though.

Credits & Info

3.95 / 5.00

Sep 28, 2007
1:46 AM EDT
Comedy - Original