not bad one
that was an alright stick animation. a little bit short overall, but it was alright to watch, a nice army setting to it and your efforts were nice.
Author Comments
PLEASE READ!!! Hi guys and gals who watch my movie. When you vote on this movie Id like you to vote on this fact. Ive just turned 13 and have been animating since i was 10. I had no training (obviously) and the only way i got to where I am now is by watching the best and learning how they make brilliant things. Im not that good yet but this is hard stuff to do an ive tried my best since the start of 2007. So plz vote on how good you think this is for someone my age who only learnt from himself how to make animations. Thats all I wanted to say. Thx ppl : )
This seems like a really good start.
Like the guy before me said:
Keep practicing. I've seen a lot worse here... and the fact that you want to get better probably means that you will.
Looking forward to the rest of this!
It ain't bad
Right you seem to have some idea of what you are doing. The animation was for the most part quite good, although you need to work on your drawing. There seemed to be some sort of story going on there but you need to put more emphasis on it, making sure you fully exploit the main character's personality.
I think it might be worth ditching this project and starting afresh, just chalk up the learning experience from this and build on it to make something better. Check out DE_Dust and DE_Aztec for some more ideas about animation and just keep practising. Good Luck.
No..
Sorry guy, it's not good. I made my animation, Army Guy & the Knife, when I was twelve. And in my opinion, sorry if it seems like I'm boasting, it's a fair bit better. Also, you do have to take into account that not everyone has the same music taste as you do. You'll get there though. Oh, and people don't usually like it when you tell them "Oooh, I'm only 13, I'm not good yet! Be nice on me!"
Oh yeah, it didn't look good when you cut off the "To Be Contin"
animatorchris2 responds:
drag the mouse along the words and the rest of the to be continued sign comes up. Also, i dont want sympathy votes coz im 13, I just dont wanna have an animation judged the same as some profesional whos been to university and got a degree in this stuff.
Newbies....
Well if you want stats I've been coming to Newgrounds since I was 19 and I'm 26 now. I remember when Flash Movies were getting recognition for sites like Newgrounds.
Truth is, It's not the worst animation I've seen. You want to think of Story.
Just because you know whats going on in each scene doesn't mean your viewers can always follow, that's my advise to you.
Credits & Info
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2.17 / 5.00
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- Apr 14, 2007
- 4:30 PM EDT