keep making flash
It was good for someone of your age(i cant see my sister do that)
I didnt get all of the story, make it a bit more clear plz.
My speaker is damaged so i voted 0 for sound.
Reviews for "Army Life"
animatorchris2 responds:
hi. the story was kinda cut short. if you didnt get it it starts out as him being born , then as a kid who decides to join the army. Next thing he knows hes on a battlefield fighting. After the first fight he slowly gets promoted untill eventually hes a commander in the army commanding a rescue mission to rescue a hostage from the building in the movie.
This seems like a really good start.
Like the guy before me said:
Keep practicing. I've seen a lot worse here... and the fact that you want to get better probably means that you will.
Looking forward to the rest of this!
Pretty Good
You know, I have seen a lot of flash, both good and bad and you know this wasnt half bad. You could do a lot better on the actual graphics but I am not one to talk. However, the rest was all good.
animatorchris2 responds:
thanks for the review. I know im not that good at drawing but with age I think the drawing skill can get better as I just practise more. Im gonna make it a bit longer in the future but i cut it short because as a 13 year old i have lots of other things to do that being stuck inside my room making movies.
Nice Try! =)
Well....considering that you're pretty new at this....I guess you've done ok! It's a bit shabby.... and the graphics are a bit...cheesy looking, but you've at least got the army atmosphere around. Just keep practicing, and I'm sure you'll do even better!
animatorchris2 responds:
thanks for the review. I suppose better graphics will come with as I get older as long as I keep practising
Not one to judge.
Well I read your authors comments and I was a tad inspired... But not too much don't flatter yourself. I'm 15, nearly 16, and I also have been animating since I was 10, so like you I'm rather impressed and/or proud of myself. I think you did an amazing job for a 13 year old and should be proud. You keep it up at this rate and you'll be great in say, oh, 7 years? Just remember, always chalange your abilitites, nobody likes sticks, and to experiement. Good luck, I have faith in you!
animatorchris2 responds:
thanks for the review! I think this is the best animation i have done so far but really I need to move off sticks i know I have a gaphics tablet nto so hopefully my drawing will start to get better soon!