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The City Rules: Ep. 1

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*Edit* I've added some subtitles, coz' i had some complaints 'bout my voice, so here it is!

Well, this is a remake of my second (this is the third) submission. I've worked on it for a week or so, dunno really. There's a note, even two: 1. I know the voice acting is crappy, blame my microphone. 2. I don't quite know if you can hear the sounds, if you can't tell me, i'll fix it. Hope that this one gets a decent score! ^-^

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Kewl

you got great animating skillz, i like the part were the guy walks under that light that would be imposible for me to do! the voice acting as you said was a little umm... can't think of a word but it didn't really suit the whole "runing away from bad guys to save my life" sort of thing.

Drag0nSnak3 responds:

Well, i'll have to add some subtitles to it... Oh, and thx.

Sweet.

Great job, and thanks for using one of my songs. I agree with g-r4ve as well. I can already tell you have amazing drawing skills, so I'll be waiting to check out some of your newest submissions. :)

nice job

good job on this one. You even looped one of my songs for your intro, nice. I've been into watching castle lately, so I can only assume thats what your aiming for. Your close, just spend a bit more time on the animation, and make sure its all smooth. Try and come up with unique camera angles too, always helps.

Drag0nSnak3 responds:

Well... As soon as i'm gonna get a graphic tablet, i'm gonna be a master! Coz', i have pro skills at drawing... Oh, and i haven't watched castle, gonna watch it soon.

ok ok

sounds pretty intresting yes. just try and animate a bit more detailed. the movement is a bit crap, for the rest it's ok

Drag0nSnak3 responds:

Well, since it is 16fps... Thx, i'll try to speed up the fps and draw a bit more detailed in the next episode.

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"the city is split into four parts..." then you show 5 coloured pieces of..turf?
lol,
it wasn't to bad, didn't really know what was going on, couldn't understand your voice, put subs in the next one, of talk more clearly.
but overall it wasn't half ass like most new vids.
4/5

Drag0nSnak3 responds:

Ok, thx for the info, i will put them.

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Jan 26, 2007
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