A great story
Wow those opening scenes really get me every time artistic in its own way, you have some nice work its like clicking on a painting and boom a whole world opens up so here again no changes needed at all its fantastic, so much energy pushed forward on this one so I was most impressed with the story but the visuals themself are something really good, you have some nice ideas and showcase them, you have some great visions that you bring forward here I was very impressed
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so here again no changes needed at all its fantastic
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