I'm really shocked that you only used Windows Media stock sound files to pull this off. I never would have guessed--and it fits the animation so well.
++Very nice quality--I love the colorful world. Nice attention to detail, especially with the smoke coming out of the carts at the airport.
-When the car screeched to a hault, the streak lines stopped before the car did, which shouldn't have happened.
-The beginning Ibby's Hair Restorer title shot had far too high of a contrast between the red text and the blue bg.
++I love the facial expressions of Ibby's lips. How did you do that? I'm guessing you fbf'd that. I'm not sure, but it's a fantastic effect that you pulled off. I've never see something like that before.
+Nice factory shots and inside jokes with the labels. They were on screen for just the amount of time needed to get the joke, which was expertly done.
I really liked the simple story but it would have been nice if there was more conflict as a whole. Still, it was a wonderfully made flash animation.