The concept and style is good, but the voice over is pretty dull.
cool i loved the mood going from trerror to cute
it was like a horror novel mixed with a doctor sues book, the a page with the poem lyrics added the end was good, the little child's voice was cute and really added to the ending, the description of the "terrible beast" was great, but i agree with Fayt-Leonhart, the line "was i on crack?" kinda took away from the scary tone, it wouldn't be as bad if you had to have "crack" to get it to rhyme but seriously there are a 100 different words that end in "ack" . if you changed that line you could use the drawings and poem lyrics to make a pretty good kids book,
Awww I loved the ending. I like how you added suspense and the animation was very nice! I really liked this one.
that was good
damn your a good poet man perhaps as good as me :)
That was a suprising ending and it made me chuckle. I liked this so i gave it a 5.