wicked
except u lost sight of ur style with using the term "was i on crack" wrong type of lexis's for the rest of the piece apart from that tho wicked
wicked
except u lost sight of ur style with using the term "was i on crack" wrong type of lexis's for the rest of the piece apart from that tho wicked
ok
i liked the poem
Cool!
I really liked this piece because this dude, he was attacked by his dog. Hee-hee! I wonder how you came up with this idea? Y'know, this actually happened to me when I was little.
Good and surprising.
that was (for some odd reason) interesting and entertaining. I lioked the crack reference.
nice i liked it
i dont know wat i liked it a such, but i still like it very much. =b