Abit long but notbad
~~REVIEW~~
Well this was good yes but it went on for too long i thought, the effects were nice and decent animation was cool, the story was good i thought, a few things that could improve on this would be to lose the NEXT button and just allow the text bubbles to move on after a few seconds instead of having to click everytime, but with that said it was a good flash.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
let the text bubbles flow, make the episodes somewhat shorter.
~~OVERALL~~
Good story nice effects, overall good stuff.
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